Angel of Death

Hey there! I quite like this though I think this can be better. When you look out into the ocean You might think what lives below When you search through ...

Hey there Faery007! I'm Angel of Death but everyone calls me Angel, and I'll be your reviewer today. Okay, first off, the title and the first two lines are too ...

Hello there! I really really liked this I have nothing to complain about! Your rhymes were precise and everything flowed beautifully. I like the title and the similes you use ...

Hello there! Wow, I like this. Whoa I've been reviewing poetry so much that I felt like I was going to have to explode but this was really good. I ...

Hello Sarah! Anonymous people swarmed around them, light valises and cumbersome trunks swinging with varied ease from dangling arms. I don't think Anonymous should be there, it's adding unneeded wait ...

Hey JC! I'm not going to go into line by line critiques, I'll just give you my overall impressions, so sorry if this is long but... One of my favorite ...

Hey there, Ky! Already, he's realized he will die out here, in the shrubgrass and the dirt that's hard and dusty and stubborn. So he prays. He prays through his ...

Hey Sarah! Thanks for reviewing The Jane Effect , and no, it is not going to be discontinued. I just want to experiment with a different beginning in the story, ...

Hey there! Okay, first off, I liked the title as I just adore the French language. Secondly, I've been critiquing poetry all week and I'm kinda getting the hang of ...

Hey Ky! Gee, you haven't wrote lyrics before and you're good at it :wink: I really really liked this. The story is great and unique because no one truly knows ...

Hello! “I am sure that will meet your requirements, Miss Lincombe,” said Maccabi, breaking Anne of in her musings. “Now, if you’ll excuse me. It’s already late, and I have ...

Hey Dreamer! This was really cute. I like how your MC was having a dream and then her dog ruined everything. But one thing that concerns me is, that these ...

Hey there Andy! I quite enjoyed this. You write really well and I think that your MC is well developed in this first chapter. You know, before I go on ...

Hello there Ten! Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy it here because this really is a great writing community. Well anyways, I'm Angel of Death but every calls me ...

No! It mustn't end here...now. Ah, shoot. I wish I read this slowly. Please, I hope you post the next chapter soon? Anyways, I think this was another one of ...